[FFML] [Exalted]The Broken Circle 2/5
sommert at connecttime.net
Mon Mar 8 13:19:17 PST 2010
Sorry it took me so long to get to this:
miashara at deepfriedpuppies.com wrote:
>Exalted is the creation and property of White Wolf Publishing. No
>As desperately as we needed to bring Angel to medical care, taking her
>directly to one of the doctors of Nibeldamt would prove its own death
>sentence. We were of the opinion that the Dynast would probably be a
>little testy after everything that had transpired
% Yeah, I don't see them being good sports about it.
>only so many places we could hide from him. Instead we took advantage
>of the fact that Ragara's mansion was on the outskirts of town. We
>made for the mountains, and found a small cave. It was littered with
>old spoor of wolf and bear, but showed no occupancy for a while.
% Search for treasure. Always do it like in D+D cause sometimes you find
the odd magic item that got left behind.
>?Mortals, have you come to my abode to offer me a sacrifice?? it
>asked. The voice was deep, fitting that it should come from the
>mountainous body. It's lungs must have been cavernous and provided a
>voice that was filled with age and the old powers.
% Odd. Questions marks seem to have replaced quotes in my version.
>Now if there's one thing I was filled with, lunacy would be a good
>name for it. ?I'm not as creative as he is, but I'm a lot more
>spiteful,? I admitted. ?Should you harm her, there is no limit to the
>horrors I will eagerly seek out to visit upon you, until the gods come
>to plead with me to stop our revenge.?
>?You stand in the presence of a god now!?
% Dog: Cool. I never killed a god before.
>?The other foundries,? said Angel, suddenly coming to a logical
>conclusion after silently placing the intervening blocks. ?Ragara
>controls one foundry, maybe more, and clearly makes a lot of money
>doing it. If someone else controls the other, they could be feuding
>and with this much money at stake, they afford some very exotic
% Exotic assassins always make things more fun. Just look at Trigun. It
didn't take off until the Gung Ho Guns showed up
>I stared at the two of them. ?It doesn't matter,? I explained. ?It's
>just a personal thing.?
>?This whole thing is a personal thing,? Angel countered.
% There are varying degrees of personal, though.
>The other two of us
% other two of us is awkward, but I'd be darned if I can see how to fix it
>Of the other four foundries, all carried the colors of brilliant
>crimson peaks on a field of green. The same symbol was repeated on
>great lumberyards to the south, and the city's formal garrison. Rows
>of houses and shops bore the crimson and green, or stylized
>iron-wrought portrayals of it. Clockwork Dog glanced at it and
>concluded 'Gens Maheka' in a confident tone. On the southern end of
>the city stood a large estate, less ostentatious than that of the
>Dynast, but more defensible. Above it blew the crimson and green over
>ornate walls that remained fully functional. Carvings and bass reliefs
% bas reliefs
>designs and mandalas. All five elements repeated, though earth symbols
>were most common. More subtly displayed, his wealth was apparent in
>well crafted doors and rooms, a plethora of guards and servants that
>wore the best in armor and livery, and imported flatware and exotic
>fruits in baskets. Everything was amazingly functional, but no more
>expensive the best need be.
% 'expensive than the best need be' perhaps?
>?I'm here, aren't I?? I shrugged. ?This isn't the first time someone's
>sicked dogs on me.?
>?You didn't lead a very honest life before coming to Highmere, did
>you?? he observed.
% Nonsense. I was always alive during my life. Honest.
>?Murderer,? he whispered and took my consciousness with his boot.
% Nice work. It might take a while but I'll continue.
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