[FFML] [Fanfic][Ranma/SM] On A Clear Day You Can See Forever Chapter 21

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In a message dated 5/6/2008 8:36:58 AM Eastern Daylight Time,  
kalle.blomster at gmail.com writes:

>>      Scattered shards of dark  crystal.
>>   
> The remnants of the fake Banri, I  presume?

I assumed this was Osiren Black. Would that mean that Dasma is  dead? That 
would 
be incredibly ironic considering that the Sisterhood was  trying to bring her 
back.

(Awesome chapter as usual, by the way. Keep  up the good work.)

//Kalle Blomster


I was thinking that it was Osiren Black...but that it actually may have  been 
a good thing.  Gar didn't show in this chapter, and I think  his absence 
significant.
 
 
Very good chapter all around.  I think I would have liked to see a bit  more 
from Rei's POV there at the end, which is unusual since for many chapters  
I've often said I thought Rei was getting a bit too much attention in the  
chapters (I think I kept saying that Rei had her fingers in everybody's pies ;)  ).
 
I also thought it a bit strange that Minako didn't mention what was going  on 
with the Sisterhood to the Queen.  Obviously the woman was somebody that  
Minako had a huge amount of respect for, and the Queen probably should have been  
told (though there was not enough time to go into the whole 
history-of-the-gods  thing).
 
Can't wait to see what Peorth has to say tomorrow!  I wonder if Ranma,  using 
mere strength, can break the chains on her.  Where magic and chi  fail, brute 
strength can work?  I wonder if she has any insight on the  demons that Ranma 
originally got the key from?
 
But overall, the chapter gets a big thumbs up from me!  Looking  forward to 
the next chapter!  I haven't been this excited about a fic since  MD's "I'm 
Here To Help" was finally finished last year!
 



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