[FFML] [xover][Ranma][MKR] Fire in the Water, Act 3 (draft complete)

Ignacio Moreno kinai2k7 at gmail.com
Tue Mar 18 15:46:03 PDT 2008


Interesting chapter.

I like specially Akane's bell part and the summon part. :D

"What the heck is that?" Ranma asked.
>
> The short-haired girl looked down forlornly at her new weapon.
>
> "I got a bell."
>
> "A bell?!"
>
> "Yes, it does appear to be a bell."
>
> Akane couldn't quite hide the disappointment she felt as she examined the
> goblet-sized, delicate-looking crystal bell she cradled in her hands.
> "It's...it's a bell," she repeated hollowly.
>
> Presea cocked her head curiously. "Funny, I've never seen that happen
> before."
>
> "Maybe it's like, a magic bell?" Ranma suggested. "Like it shoots stuff or
> somethin'?"
>
> Akane gave the bell a halfhearted ring. It sang out a clear, pure tone,
> but
> did little else.
>
> "Well, sound pretty at least," Shampoo observed.
>
> Akane sank to her knees, throwing her head back and letting out a roar of
> frustration. "What the hell am I supposed to do with a BELL?" she cried.
>

Akane: "I had prefered a hammer..."

"Yeah," Ascot said, stifling childish giggles. "You've still got control
> over that thing. It's your magic, after all." He frowned, then rubbed the
> back of his head sheepishly. "Um, I don't know how a Caller gets rid of a
> summoned monster, by the way. I mean, Callers don't even really exist,
> so..."
>
> "So I'm stuck with that creepy thing?" Akane asked.
>
> "For now anyway, yeah."
>
> Akane sighed. "Perfect."


I suppose that the only thing that stop Akane to name it -chan is that it
hasn't a name. :D

The girls blinked. Umi tilted her head. "What, is he--"
>
> "Extremely devoted to his master," Clef cut across her, smirking slightly.


In a non-Yaoi way.

The leader chuckled throatily, stalking forward and placing a gloved hand on
> the Machine's armored hide, stroking it fondly, a lover's caress. Then,
> with
> a graceful leap, she stood atop the device, opened its top hatch, and
> descended into its control pit. "Gather your weapons and mounts. It is
> time."


Did they make a tank?????? :O
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