[FFML] [fanfic][Ranma/MKR] Fire in the Water, Act 2

[skychan]

When speaking of Jusenkyo what about the spring of drowned twins, and I'm
curious when/if people are going to realize that Cephiro is a land where
will is power, and that could very well mean Hikaru can get a new body if
she just wills it hard enough.  Given the variable nature of power in
Cephiro I think that as you continue to write you should be careful to make
sure you are taking things like this into account.

For example, the sickness in Cephiro, it has to be more powerful than even
the pillar's love for zagato, and his love for her, given that if it were
not they should be able to overcome it.  Thats a very impressive statement
given the worldview of the genre your writing in.
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