[FFML] [Fanfic][Ranma/SM] On A Clear Day You Can See Forever Chapter 22

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Hmmmm, very nice chapter.  I was a little surprised that Kendra didn't  
respect Gar a bit more, but I guess in the circumstance it made sense.  I  was also 
surprised that the Dark Lady didn't notice anything unusal about  Ranma...as 
in he didn't belong in this world.  Since it seems, if I'm  reading things 
correctly, that she herself may have come from elsewhere, I would  think she 
would recognize any signs.
 
If I were to guess what will happen in the next chapter, I would say that  
Ranma will discover that he is no longer cursed.  I think something went  wonky 
with that spirit containment spell that held Peorth, and pulled his female  
side out of him.  I think this because he seemed to have changed back  without 
noticing, and he wasn't female the rest of the story.  And is his  key with him 
still?  That is something I would definately think he would  realize is gone, 
but Dasma didn't feel it, all those portals didn't make it  twinge in any 
way, and you don't hear anything about it since Peorth's  release.  Shrug, I may 
be stretching here though.  After all,  something so important to him would 
definately be missed immediately.
 
Anyways, I look forward to the next chapter!



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