[FFML] [fanfic][Ranma/MKR] Fire in the Water, Act 2

[Ignacio Moreno]

Excellent.

I am sorry that I can't tell you any way to make it better.

Overall I like your descriptions. I know how hard is make a good description
because I am having problems with them too.

Good job!!!

Kinai.
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