[FFML] [fanfic] NGE: Endgame, 02

[Chen Yong]

Shinji suffers from amnesia, and, with EVA-01 vanished amidst mysterious circumstances, NERV seeks to uncover the secrets of EVA-02's operational anomalies exhibited during its first deployment.A very rough draft as usual, and dialogue is definitely not my forte. Again, C&C is much appreciated as I have no regular pre-readers; thanks in advance. As an afterthought, the ridiculously insignificant damage produced by Sachiel's selfdestruct had always struck me as odd, which I have rectified to my liking in this chapter.
 
The previous chapter can be located at: http://www.geocities.com/janus_solcroft/endgame/endgame01.txt
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