[FFML] [Ace Ventura][Ranma 1/2] Ace Ventura: Suddenly Seeking Panda #2

[Rebecca Heineman]

Uh, thank you? I think?

Thank you for your email. Yes, I went insane when I wrote this. After I
wrote the first story, Cory Rose bugged me to do a sequel, and only until
now did I come up with something that worked (At least in my opinion).

I'm glad you're enjoying my little yarn. The third chapter will wrap up
everything.

:)

I hope you like the fact that Ace spends most of his time getting beaten up
by the Nerima Wrecking Crew. I'm not done with him yet.

Becky


> This is arguably the stupidest well written thing I've ever read. Ace
> Ventura, a leading contender for the stupidest movie ever made,
> crossed with Ranma in a bizzare, twisted, and disturbingly obvious
> plot line makes me wonder if I am in fact getting dumber. These two
> series should never even be mentioned in the same breath, and you've
> managed to mix the two easily. That frightens me. I find absolutely no
> problems with suspension of disbelief or interseries continuity. That
> disturbs me.
> 
> Ace's humor doesn't translate very well, but you've done an exception
> job of keep the frivolous nature of him. He's a buffoon, and a
> remarkably consistent one. He fits in perfectly.
> 
> Ranma's cast is slightly muted from normal, but that's fine. The story
> flows well, I like your dialogue, and most of the gags hit. When they
> miss, meh, there's another coming along shortly. I also really like
> your portrayal of Nabiki's mental workings.
> 
> The only negative criticism I have is you seem to be following all the
> fanficion conventions. Nabiki extorts money, Ryouga gets lost and
> winds up on other continents, etc. It isn't a problem because the
> story is absurd to begin with, but I'm not fond of it. I wonder if
> introducing the whole cast is really necessary. If you enjoy it, rock
> on. But it may get difficult to drag the lot of them around with you.
> 
> Anyway, huzzah huzzah. Go to it.
> 
> Miashara
> Left handed compliments since 1997

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