[FFML] [Naruto][AU] People Lie
skywize at gmail.com
Mon Sep 10 14:44:13 PDT 2007
This was a very good story and I am enjoying it. Also I did notice
immediately the point at which naruto gained a follower. Very well done.
I'm a bit late to jump in on all of the comments but I do hope to see more
of Choji and Shikarmaru. I think that their reactions to the "new" naruto
will be telling and hope that you pay particular attention to that dynamic.
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