[FFML] [Naruto] White Bird

[Eimii]

On 9/4/07, The Eternal Lost Lurker <lurkerdrome at sbcglobal.net> wrote:
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Heh... i still gotta disagree with you on the odds of Neji getting his
seal removed, but otherwise...

I can't find any glaring mechanical errors, and this does seem to be
one of the most logical conclusions of a Hinata/Naruto relationship.
I've thought about the 'cage' thing before as well, and had considered
having Hinata use the analogy in Suiren, but you beat me to it... :P

For a shortfic to illustrate this conclusion, it works; might've been
nice to see a little more of Hinata's personalty, as its hard to guage
how much she has or hasn't changed over the years, but otherwise, good
show...

~Eimii