[FFML] [XOver][R.5/Macross] Macross 1/2 Part 6 Chapter 5: Mutiny

[skychan]

Your welcome.  and I look forward to seeing more kyle bashing fun soon.

On 10/31/07, Timothy Groves <groves_ca at yahoo.co.uk> wrote:
>
> skychan wrote:
> > God you have to love idots like Lynn Kyle.  Though for the record, it
> seems
> > unlikely that the tomahawk's missles cooking off would destroy it and
> more
> > likely in the case of one of the Spartans or a Galdiator.  This chapter
> > seems a bit unfinished.  I think you might want to go through one more
> time
> > to flesh bits out some more.  While I like the mirror assaults I don't
> know
> > that we get quite enough detail on either to make them feel
> real.  Perhaps a
> > bit about who is with each group beyond the commanders earlier.
> >
> Hey, I'm a lot nicer to Kyle than Lisa Grey was in Dragon Lady of
> Macross. :)
>
> As to the Tomahawk issue, it matter little whether the explosions of the
> missiles would completely destroy the Mecha. They would, at least,
> remove the arms, probably destroy the linkages required to operate the
> torso gun mount, and certainly wipe out the medium-range missile box.
> Therefore rendering unarmed, and without the ability to fight even in
> hand-to-hand. The crew are probably fine, but it's out of the fight.
>
> And I note the typical confusion with Macross vs Robotech Destroid
> naming; 'Spartans' in Macross (and my fic) are referred to as
> 'Gladiators' in Robotech; the 'Spartans' of Robotech are 'Phalanx' in
> Macross.
>
> You're right that this chapter could use a bit of fleshing out; I intend
> to go through the whole damn thing when it's done and give many other
> chapters that treatment.
>
> Thanks for writing!
>
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