[FFML] [XOver][R.5/Macross] Macross 1/2 Part 6 Chapter 5: Mutiny

[skychan]

God you have to love idots like Lynn Kyle.  Though for the record, it seems
unlikely that the tomahawk's missles cooking off would destroy it and more
likely in the case of one of the Spartans or a Galdiator.  This chapter
seems a bit unfinished.  I think you might want to go through one more time
to flesh bits out some more.  While I like the mirror assaults I don't know
that we get quite enough detail on either to make them feel real.  Perhaps a
bit about who is with each group beyond the commanders earlier.

On 10/27/07, Angus MacSpon <macspon at ihug.co.nz> wrote:
>
>
> On 28/10/2007, at 17:02, Timothy Groves wrote:
> > Tail Kinker Presents
> >
> > Macross 1/2
> >
> > Part Six Chapter Five:
> >
> > Mutiny
>
> Whoo-hoo!
>
> I've been enjoying this story for a loooong time now.  Glad to see more
> of it.
>
> Plus, as far as I can see, it's getting real close to the end ...
>
> Cheers,
> Angus
>
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