[FFML] [Ranma] Life is Complicated, Part II

[Eduardo Arancibia]

I'll have to agree with the man. While I read the
whole first chapter, I lost interest in part II quite
quickly.


--- John Allen delos Santos <patricianallen at yahoo.com>
wrote:

> It was a good start...  despite the errors that
> Lurker mentioned Chapter 1 started out as an
> interesting premise...  It didn't turn out so well
> in this chapter.  One thing that bothered me was
> that in the middle of this chapter the new
> characters took over and a feel of 'Author Insert
> Fic' began to make itself known.  You might wanna
> give less screen time to your new characters, as per
> your heading this is a Ranma fanfic not a who knows
> who else is there fanfic.
> 
> My two cents on the matter
> 
> Jiro Maeda
> 
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