[FFML] [C&C] Goddess Fayu

[The Eternal Lost Lurker]

> The Eternal Lost Lurker wrote:
> > Jan Ken Pow: The variant in which the first one to punch the others in
the
> > face wins.
> >
> Did I spell it wrong?

It's "jan ken pon" :)

> > It helps that Kasumi has the same divine blood, no? Because otherwise,
> > mortals can't even see those...
> >
> That was sort of what I was getting at. I just don't care to spoon-feed
> my readers.

Indeed. Nicely done. :)

> > That was a fun read, but I'll be honest: it seems
> > somewhat...well...pointless, to have it just abruptly end like that. I
do
> > get the impression you're probably planning a sequel to this, because it
> > just seems to me that there's so much more to be done with this idea. As
it
> > stands, though, while it was fun to read, it just...didn't go anywhere.
> >
> Others have noted this as well.  You are correct, there is a lot more that
I plan to do with this - I have the outline for the second part (not really
a sequel, but a continuation) halfway done.

OK, good. Was hoping that would be the case. :)

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