[FFML] [AYA] The Wild, Wild East - Chapt. 6 - Whitewater Waffing

[GL Sandborn]

DB Sommer wrote:

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>>The list is back!  I guess I'll submit something.
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>% And I shall finally C+C something as well
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Yea!  A DB C+C!

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>>[This has some... eh, 'almost lemon' parts.  So, beware.  ;-) ]
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>% lime then.
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It's all in the mind.  :-)

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>>The Wild, Wild East
>>Chapter 6 - Whitewater Waffing
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>% We'll see how WAFFy it is.
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Well, it was WAFFy - but it's much better now.

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>>by GL Sandborn
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>>   The Professor chuckled and waved a hand in an embarrassed way.  "I
>>suppose I should have told you earlier but the conference has been put
>>off a month," he said.  "There's no real hurry now."
>>   "Oh, well, I suppose that will give me time to check everything
>>again," Kaoru replied, tucking the book under his arm.
>>   Professor Isemoto leaned back in his chair, ignoring its loud
>>squeak as he did, and reached for a large envelope.  Taping its edge
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>% He taped it. Or did you mean 'tapped' as in made a noise with it?
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Yeah, David McMillan caught that first.  (My damn spell checker isn't 
worth the electricity it takes to power it.!)

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>> "No, not really.  She's doing something with her family, so I have
>>all weekend to..."  Kaoru's voice tapered off as he suddenly realized
>>what the professor was getting at.
>>   "My, my, all alone with nothing to do," Isemoto said with a tiny
>>smile that grew just enough to cause Kaoru to go from chilled to a
>>sudden sweat.  "Hanabishi, you are one of the best students we have in
>>this law school."
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>% At least until he walked right into that one.
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Hanabishi tends to lead with his chin a lot of the time.  (Sometimes, 
not the brightest bulb on the tree, either.)

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>>   "Are you sure about his, sir?"  Kaoru hesitantly took the paper.
>>   "Of course.  You'll make a fine envoy,"
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>% 'fine envoy' meaning 'not Isemoto'
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Yup, fine so long as it's anybody but.

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>>   "KAORU!"
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>>   "Nightmare?" he asked,
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>% Tina: No thanks. I just had one.
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>>   "Yes!  Well, maybe," she said with a frown.  "I guess..., I just
>>don't know anymore.  The only friends I really have are there.  I mean,
>>it would be nice to talk to Miss Landlord again.  She's so much smarter
>>about things than I am.  She always has a way of making complicated
>>things simple."
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>% She's like alchohal then. It makes things complicated things seem 
>simple, too, ifyou drink enough. It's usually wrong, but it does make 
>them seem that way.
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I think you just summed up Tina's Japanese existence.

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>>   "I'm sorry, Tina.  It's the tourist season.  All the hotels and
>>inns are booked."  The old lady paused to think as Tina held her breath.
>>"I know," she said as if it were an original idea.  "Why don't you and
>>your new husband stay here?"
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>% Mrs. Minazuki: We can have a threeway if you'd like.
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That.... would make it more than a 'lime'.  (And probably cross over the 
boundaries of good taste.)  :-P

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>>   "Want me to come with?" Tina asked.
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>'% with you?" perhaps? it sounds off ending at with
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Sometimes, when I write, I try to sound out the dialog.  This 
occasionally leads to some oddly sounding sentences.
You're probably right. 

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>>   Things were coming together in Steven's head.  All the drinking,
>>the comment from Mrs. Minazuki, and Tina's sudden strange behavior - it
>>all added up now.  With a heavy sigh, he shook his head.  "Nope.  I told
>>you before.  I'm not going to do anything that would compromise--"
>>   "WHY NOT?" she gasped incredulously.  "What's wrong with this body?
>>Am I not pretty enough for you?  Are my boobs too small?"
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>% Steven: Too small for what? Exerting their own gravitational pull?
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Interesting observation.

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>> She absently
>>grabbed her own breasts and gave them a squeeze.  That act caused her to
>>pause a moment with a curious frown.  "Actually, they're not bad."  She
>>squeezed them again.  "I wonder, have I been squeezing other women's
>>breasts in compensation for my reluctance to touch my own?"
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>% Now this is where the man needs to grab a chair and just watch, saying 
>nothing.
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Yeah, but Steven's not that sharp.

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>>   "Sure," she whispered, her eyes dropping to his feet.  A regular
>>bath would be nice but a moonlight swim in the same groto that Kaoru and
>>Aoi used a couple of years ago would be even better - even if she would
>>insist they swim in their underwear.
>>   "Stay here with Mrs. Minazuki and 
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>% Minazuki, and
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OK

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>>   The results were the same as before.  The strong aroma of chemicals
>>attacked everything including her taste buds as the world seemed to spin
>>into darkness.  Her last thought was how fitting an end it was now that
>>she knew about Steven and his little 'girlfriend'.
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>% Well, next chapter should be interesting. Already can't wait. Nice 
>work on this one. Felt like a lot happened in a limited amount of space.
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Trying to cut down my 100+ page chapters with this story.  I'm 
tightening up the scenes and concentrating on fewer characters.
You're right, the next chapter is where all the 'action' takes place.

Thanks for commenting, DB.  Always a high point of my postings to bet 
something from you.

- GL

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