[FFML] [R.5/AMS] Goddess Fayu Chapter 6: A Demonic Wager (Draft)

Bira u.alberton at gmail.com
Thu Jul 12 13:45:05 PDT 2007


On 7/12/07, Timothy Groves <groves_ca at yahoo.co.uk> wrote:
> It's Nabiki, Ice Queen of Nerima. Of *course* she's smart and composed.
>
> I don't know about you, but I'd be doing an Arthur Dent in her place...

Most people would :).

Another thing I liked it is that she actually outwits her antagonists,
which is awfully rare in a genre where most heroes have tiny brains
and rely on brute force and guts :).

> > I'd love to see a sequel, too, as the first story seems to set up a
> > lot of interesring situations for the future :).
> >
> I didn't take great pains to hide it, did I? I wanted this fic to be
> self-contained, but expandable. I may take up this thread at a later
> date, or someone else could if they wish. (Though I've got a few notes
> that never made it into the story, so if you decide you want to take a
> whack at it, let me know and I'll share them.)

If I started on that, I might finish it by 2015 or so... But I am
interested in taking a look at those notes, out of curiosity if
nothing else :).

-- 
Bira
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