[FFML] H.P. Lovecraft (Lovecraftian??) Floors

[Robyn, Duke of Amber]

Matthew Miller <mille2ml at gmail.com>Matthew Miller
<mille2ml at gmail.com>Matthew Miller <mille2ml at gmail.com>On Sun, 8 Jul 2007,
Matthew Miller wrote:

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> How was that connected to "Coral?" The name should be sunken ho-boat or
> something.

heh

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> Now I'm not sure how messianic you want this to be, black messiahs can be
> very interesting characters, but since you aren't developping this at all
> (are you?) I going to assume that just makes her more evil in comparison. We
> don't really get any view into her motivations, so I'm going to have to
> write her off as evil servant of the Old Ones.
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pretty much actually.

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> Like I said, very good idea and good execution. Grammatically though, it
> violently inhaled. When you've got an idea as good as this, you may want to
> let it sit for a while and then go back over it looking for usage. But hey,
> still a good fic.
>

Sounds like a good idea. I know it needs some work - which is why I posted
it.
I may get right to it or give it a couple of weeks for distance.

 Glad you liked it.

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> background
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> > chunks broken off and deeper water with deeper sea creatures.
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> Actually, I'd really like to see that floor. It intrigues me too.

I should drag a friend with a digi can there :)


thanks for rthe C&C

 Neil

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