[FFML] [Naruto/Slayers][XOVer][formated]Hurricane Magic Prologue

[Wanderer D]

On the bright side, you have everyone's attention now. So, if you manage to format it (the txt
idea  mentioned is known to work just try 72 to 80 characters per line max) you're bound to get
something. Don't feel you're being attacked, in the end, all of these people are interested in
fan-fiction and will be your best allies in becoming a better writer.

-WD

> You might want to try formatting the story as a .txt file before you try 
> to send it.  Whatever you're using to format this is *not* working.
> 
> Oberon wrote:
> > The condensed version is that Naruto learns a fewSlayers verse spells and now everyone thinks
> he'sa genius hiding as an idiot. Of course, you canimagine Sasuke's response to that. If you
> readS'tarkon's Legacy of the Resengan then this isjust the opposite. Legacy had everyone
> thinkingNaruto is an idiot while he's an genius. This haseverything thinking he's a genius while
> he'sactually an idiot.Unlike "Legacy", there will actually be changesbecause of Naruto's action.
> You'll see deviationfrom canon early on, minor at first but they'llbuild up to a climax much
> differently than canonNaruto. (Legacy had major changes early on thatresulted in minor
> deviations later in the story)Standard disclaimer:  I don't own Naruto orSlayers.  All
> characters are the property of theoriginal author.  All use of said character andsimilar
> situation falls under the fan fictioncategory and is unintended for profit.I'm looking for a
> beta for this story so if you'reinterested, please drop me a line atffml_use at hotmail.comYou can
> also see rougher version which I will postat the Rokudaime
> forumshttp://z7.invisionfree.com/Rokudaime/Enjoy and please review
> >   
> (snip to dense and unreadable EOT)
> 
> --Steffan
> 
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