[FFML] [C&C] [SM] Sailor Moon 4200: Chapter 13

[Angus MacSpon]

On 23/08/2007, at 09:48, Bob Schroeck wrote:
> No offense taken here -- and I just finally got to read it today.
> Good stuff, as always, Angus.  Moon's identity (both of them) caught
> me completely flat-footed, but I'm pretty sure I know who Emma is.
> <grin>  Longing to see where this goes from here, but since your
> production speed is even slower than mine, I'm going to have to
> bank my fires for a while, I suspect.

Heh.  I keep telling myself that if I keep up the writing rate I was  
working at when I finished the chapter, I can easily have chapter 14  
finished this year.  In practice, that's a big 'if'!

> On the technical side, nothing grammar- or spelling-wise caught my
> eye, and the actual craft of the plot is as always up to your high
> standards.

Thanks!

> -- Bob

Cheers,
Angus

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