[FFML] [C&C] [SM] Sailor Moon 4200: Chapter 13

[Bob Schroeck]

> On 13/08/2007, at 07:04, Angus MacSpon wrote:
>> Glad you liked it.  Um, glad that someone seems to have read it,
>> actually...!
> Okay, on reflection that was a bit petty of me.  Sorry, everyone.

No offense taken here -- and I just finally got to read it today.
Good stuff, as always, Angus.  Moon's identity (both of them) caught
me completely flat-footed, but I'm pretty sure I know who Emma is.
<grin>  Longing to see where this goes from here, but since your
production speed is even slower than mine, I'm going to have to
bank my fires for a while, I suspect.

On the technical side, nothing grammar- or spelling-wise caught my
eye, and the actual craft of the plot is as always up to your high
standards.

-- Bob

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Bob Schroeck          http://www.eclipse.net/~rms           rms at eclipse.net
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Then the horns kicked in...
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