[FFML] [C&C] [SM] Sailor Moon 4200: Chapter 13

[LaShawn]

Ah...I finally got around to reading this. Always worth the wait.

Kudos for making Sailor Moon someone we have no clue of. Although she did
show up some, didn't she, now that I think of it. I wish I had more time to
read the story over again.

The best was having Serenity show up, of course. I really teared up at the
talk between her and Rei/Atsuko.

The parts where the girls froze and Serenity told the same beginning to each
one did slow the story down for me a bit. It became a little annoying to
read over and over "I frozen the others..." I would just cut that out and
just have Serenity speak to each girl privately. Of course, I wondered why
couldn't Serenity just speak with the girls simultaneously, or create a wall
of silence around each girl while she spoke to them.

Iku's growing more and more of an enigma. I *thought* I knew who she might
be, but now I'm not sure (especially since Serenity just said that she
couldn't send herself forward. So scratch that theory). I might have another
theory, but I think I'll wait for the next chapter and see.

And yay! Tuxdo Kamen is back! I just can't *wait* to see Mamoru wake up. It
will be very interesting indeed...

Thanks, Angus, for another fine chapter! Looking forward to the next one!

LaShawn

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