[FFML] [Fanfic][Ranma][Ratatouille] The Secret of Ukyo: Food & Love (second try

[The Hunterminator]

>
>  I'd like to request a translation on the two french lines though, for us
> folks who 'no habla francais' :)
>

"Votre Français s'est amélioré beaucoup depuis que vous vous êtes réveillé."
(Takes an extra e at the end. 'Réveillée')

That sentence means "Your french has improved a lot since you woke up." A
very polite and formal you by the way.

"Que voulez-vous dire? N' avons nous pas parlé japonais?"

And this one means "What do you mean? Haven't we been speaking Japanese?" in
this case as well, a very polite you.

I think those "Vous" might be a bit too stiff for conversation between
friends. Nabiki could be purposefully speaking in an overly formal manner,
but I think Ukyo wouldn't in this case. Maybe you could replace 'Que
voulez-vous dire?' with 'Que veux-tu dire?'?

Beyond those nitpicks, I must say I like this story quite a bit.


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Gabriel Pelletier

A.K.A The Hunterminator
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