[FFML] [Ranma][Thy Outward Part] Faces
ekopczyn at st.swps.edu.pl
ekopczyn at st.swps.edu.pl
Thu Aug 16 06:55:19 PDT 2007
The fic was very well written as always. I love stories from Your
universe. The only thing I missed was more of Kentaro and Ranma. I would
really like to read a new story featuring more of them.
The characters of main protagonist and children were extremely well
constructed and very interesting, and I agree with other readers about the
need for more internal monologue at the end.
Thank You, great job, awaiting more :)
Takaya
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