[FFML] [C&C] [XOver][R.5/Bleach] Pale Horse

[The Eternal Lost Lurker]

OK, some general comments on the fic to date.

First off, I notice as of chapter 8 you're using the proper term 'gigai'
instead of 'fake body'. Excellent.

Now, a couple of romanisation nitpicks:

- "Zampakto" is...an odd and awkward spelling. More properly, it should be
rendered as "zanpakutou". (Or 'zanpakuto' or 'zanpakutoh'.)

- No rendering of Jusenkyo I have ever come across has had an 'h' in it
anywhere. I don't know where you're getting this from, but ditch it. It
sticks out badly.

Putting those kinds of comments aside:

Quite enjoying this little fic. :)

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