[FFML] [Ranma][Thy Outward Part] Faces

[Stitman, Charles]

To be honest I've always both liked and hated your stories.
Can't stop reading them though.
Your characterizations fit the circumstances and your writing technique
is good.
You write dialog well and you don't get bogged down in excessive detail.
I think I find your stories disturbing because I too often identify with
Ranma too much.
Always have.
Though Takahashi brushes over the angst I've often though she missed a
bet writing Ranma 1/2 as a comedy.
Mythologically, the changing of ones form into another is either a curse
or a blessing depending on how much control the changer has. In your
story Ranma loses what little control he has and learns to live and
adapt to her new life. Once she adapted regaining that bit of control or
even losing the curse would become the new curse. A curious circle of
pain.
I hope this isn't a one shot I'd like to see it continued.
Charles Stitman (guyverchaz at hotmail.com)