[FFML] [XOver][R.5/Bleach] Pale Horse Chapter 6: Tainted (2nd try)

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Mon Aug 6 14:25:29 PDT 2007


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> 
> My busted up mouse accidentally spewed random pastes all over the fic.  
> Trying again with a clean version.
> 
> Disclaimer
> 
> Ranma 1/2 was created by Takahashi Rumiko, and anyone who doesn't
> already know this won't understand this story anyway.  Bleach was
> created by Tite Kubo;  you don't really need to have seen Bleach to
> understand this fic, but just so you know, anything not Ranma related in
> here was created by him.
> 
> 
> 
> - - -
> 
> Ranma asked, "What do you know about Jushenkyou?"
> 
> "A terrible place.  It gives me nightmares."
> 
> "You and me both," he snorted.
> 
> - - -
> 
> "Why?"  Akane's eyes glistened with tears.  "Why the hell -wouldn't- you
> tell me?  You are--were--my fiance!"
> 
> - - -
> 
> Happousai pulled a small ivory disk out of his robes and flipped it to
> Shampoo;  she batted it aside, but the instant it touched her skin, she
> was wracked with pain, as though she were absorbing thousands of volts
> of electricity.
> 
> - - -
> 
> Akane leaned back against the dojo wall, then collapsed to the floor.
> Her eyes overflowed with tears.
> 
> - - -
> 
> "Those five will not remain separate for long;  they are too used to
> working together."
> 
> Akane stared in horror.  "They're gonna clobber her!  I gotta help her!"
> 
> "No."
> 
> - - -
> 
> 
> 
> Tail Kinker Presents
> 
> 
> Pale Horse
> 
> 
> Chapter 6:  Tainted
> 
> 
> 
> "Hold!"
> 
> Ranma raised a hand, and the two girls broke apart.  Masami was
> breathing in shuddering breaths, and a red mark on her cheek would be
> browning up quite nicely.  Akane, on the other hand, looked as fresh as
> when she'd begun.
> 
> "C'mon, Ranma.  I wasn't even working up a sweat!"
> 
> "We got company."  Ranma gestured to the door, where a young woman was
> standing.
> 
> She was an odd-looking thing, even for Nerima.  Her hair was a silvery
> purple in colour, and she was dressed in black hakama and kimono.  The
> look on her face was almost one of fear.
> 
> "I came to see Masami.  And to see Shaolan."
> 
> Ranma rolled his eyes.  "Listen, lady, ya can't just go around talkin'
> about this sorta stuff, okay?  Not even in Nerima."
> 
> "I have some scrolls that you requested, Masami.  And my Captain wanted
> me to meet with you, Saotome."
> 
> Ranma looked the newcomer over.  "With me, or with her?"
> 
> "I should tell you the truth.  I need to speak to both of you."
> 
> "We're the same person."
> 
> The woman tilted her head.  "Then why did you make the distinction just
> now?"
> 
> "Because this is all gettin' to be too damn confusin'."  Ranma sighed.
> "Want some tea?"
> 
> 
> 
>  - - - - -
> 
>  
>  
> "Kotetsu Isane is the second in command - I believe your word is
> Lieutenant - of the Fourth Division of the Gotei Thirteen.  The Fourth
> Division is, as I already mentioned, primarily made up of healers and
> support staff.  They are not front-line warriors, but important to any
> major operation."
> 
> Isane smiled.  "You do us justice.  Many, especially those in the
> Eleventh Division, feel that we are an unneccessary waste of manpower."
> Ranma considered this, then asked, "What do you know about Jushenkyou?"
> 
> "A terrible place.  It gives me nightmares."
> 
> "You and me both," snorted Ranma. Ranma snorted.  "Unneccessary?  No
> army can survive without support or docs."
> 
> "I did not say that I agreed with them," said Isane with a smile.  She
> sipped her tea, then continued.  "In addition to healers and support
> staff, we also number a few curse-breakers.  Since magic has become less
> popular on this realm, we have fewer in that calling than before."
> 
> "Shaolan was a curse-breaker, right?"
> 
> "Yes.  And one of the best."  Isane nodded.  "When she died, the Fourth
> Division took the Orchid as its symbol in her honour."
> 
> "Oy."  Ranma paused.  "My Chinese ain't so good.  'Shaolan' means Little
> Orchid, right?"
> 
> "Yes."
> 
> "When I'm out and about as a Death God, that part of me uses the name
> 'Ranko'."
> 
> "Orchids again," mused Isane.
> 
> "Not the way I think of it.  But that other part of me..."  He sighed.
> "The part that wants to be Shinigami..."
> 
> Isane drained her teacup, and set it down.  "Now, about these scrolls.
> Masami, may I ask why you are requesting information on the Impureza?
> This seems to be more our department than yours."
> 
> "At the moment, it is both.  But I have a Fourth Division Shinigami
> already on site to assist."  Masami glanced pointedly at Ranma.  "I
> thank you for the trouble of delivering them personally, however."
> 
> Ranma frowned.  "Impureza?"
> 
> "I will discuss it with you at a later time."
> 
> "No, I think now is good."  He turned to Isane.  "What is an Impureza?"
> 
> Isane sighed.  "They are not fortunate, that much is certain.  Humans
> who have been tainted by the psychic venom of a Hollow tend to become
> darker, more sadistic, and generally unpleasant.  They can cause their
> souls serious damage due to the way they act."
> 
> "So if...someone were tainted like this, they become evil?"
> 
> Isane shook her head.  "Not so much evil;  they definitely become
> selfish, and lose contact with the emotions and motivations of others.
> Only their own matters to them."
> 
> "Not overnight, though?"
> 
> "No, it can take years."
> 
> Ranma considered this, then asked, "What do you know about Jushenkyou?"
> 
> "A terrible place.  It gives me nightmares."
> 
> "You and me both," snorted Ranma.  "What I was thinkin' is, all the
> Cursed people that I've freed from their Hollows.  What are the odds
> that they're these Impuwhatsits?"
> 
> Isane considered this.  "There is a possibility, but I would doubt it
> personally.  Generally, the Hollow needs to transfer energy between
> itself and its victim to infect them.  Even then, it only happens one
> time in about ten.
> 
> "However, I would agree that it would be best to be sure.  Who in this
> district has been cursed?"
> 
> Ranma began ticking them off on his fingers.  "Pops;  Mousse;  Shampoo -
> we haven't dealt with her yet;  me, but you know the score on that;
> Ryouga--"
> 
> He winced.
> 
> Akane looked up in surprise.  "Ryouga had a Jushenkyou curse!?"
> 
> "Damn..."  Ranma thought quickly.  "Remember that night he attacked me
> in the middle of the night?  When you found me talkin' to the dog?  I
> thought that that was Ryouga, but it was just the neighbour's dog."
> 
> "Oh."  Akane nodded.
> 
> "Yeah, the whole feud between me an' him is because he figured it was my
> fault he was cursed."
> 
> Akane chuckled.  "I never knew that Ryouga could turn into a dog."
> 
> "Dog?"  Masami looked puzzled.  "Then why did his Hollow look like a
> pig?"
> 
> There was a dead silence, broken as Akane's teacup shattered in her
> grasp.
> 
> "Did you say...pig?"
> 
> "Yes.  One of our officers on a routine patrol saw the fight."  Masami
> scratched her head.  "She said that the beast definitely resembled a
> pig."
> 
> Ranma raised his hands.  "It's not what you think!"
> 
> "You always called him P-Chan, or pig-boy...You objected to him sleeping
> in my bed--and Ryouga had that crush on me--"
> 
> Ranma blinked.  "You knew about that?"
> 
> "You could see it from space!"  Akane stood up, a glower shadowing her
> face.  "You knew!  You knew that he was P-Chan, and you never told me!"
> 
> "I promised not to!"
> 
> "Why?"  Akane's eyes glistened with tears.  "Why the hell -wouldn't- you
> tell me, promise or no?  You are--were--my fiance!"  She turned and
> stomped off.
> 
> "Akane, wait!"  Ranma jumped up and ran after her.
> 
> Isane watched the two leave, then turned to Masami.  "Is this usual
> here?"
> 
> Masami nodded.
> 
> 
> 
> - - - - -
> 
> 
> 
> Shampoo dropped the cloth on the table with a snort of disgust.
> 
> Whatever had cured Mousse of his curse had also left the blind boy quite
> ill;  with him curled up in bed upstairs, and her great-grandmother off
> running some errand, it left her the only person in the restaurant.
> Between the rushes, such as now, she could handle it, but she fervently
> hoped that Cologne would return before lunch.
> 
> The bell rang over the door.  Shampoo assumed her most welcoming smile,
> and turned.  "Welcome to--"  She cut off.  "You!"
> 
> Happousai grinned up at the Amazon.  "Glad to see me?"
> 
> "You go away!  Not welcome in place of Amazons!"
> 
> "Now, is that any way to speak to your master?"  He pulled a small ivory
> disk out of his robes;  Shampoo noted that it was ornately carved, and
> was instantly wary.
> 
> "Catch!"  He flipped it to her;  she batted it aside, but the instant it
> touched her skin, she was wracked with pain, as though she were
> absorbing thousands of volts of electricity.
> 
> Her screams were almost drowned out by Happousai's cackles of glee.
> 
> 
> 
> - - - - - -
> 
> 
> 
> "Akane, please listen to me for once!"
> 
> Akane whirled to face him.  "You've kept this from me for almost a
> year!  What else haven't you told me?  Maybe you're really a girl who
> turns into a boy?"
> 
> "I wanted to tell you, but--"
> 
> "But you considered a promise to a low-life like Ryouga to be more
> important than your fiance!"
> 
> "Ever heard of bushido?"  Ranma scowled.  "This was Ryouga's weak spot;
> I couldn't tell -anyone-."
> 
> "But you let him sleep in my bed, you let him watch me change - I told
> him everything!"
> 
> "Stuff you couldn't tell me."
> 
> "Yes!  I--"  She paused.
> 
> "You see?"  Ranma sighed.  "Akane, when this whole thing started, we
> weren't gettin' along too well, and we were still fightin' our Pops on
> the whole engagement thing."
> 
> "But--"
> 
> "Akane, you just had your say.  It's my turn."
> 
> It was the first time she could remember that he'd ever cut her off like
> that.  She clamped her mouth shut and waited.
> 
> "First.  I didn't -let- him do anythin'.  If you recall, I was
> constantly tryin' to keep him out of there.  Remember?  You hit me a lot
> because of it."
> 
> "But--"
> 
> "Second."  He raised his voice, to cut her off again.  "I dropped plenty
> of hints.  Like you put it, you could see it from space!"
> 
> "But I--"  She paused, the tears now flowing freely from her eyes.
> "Didn't you care?  Didn't it matter to you that Ryouga, with that crush
> of his, was -sleeping in my bed with me-?"
> 
> "Didn't I just say that?"
> 
> "I..."  She choked back a sob.  "I told him everything, Ranma.
> Everything about how I felt, when you made me angry."
> 
> "And he'd try to pound me over it later."
> 
> Her features hardened.  "At least -he- stuck up for me!  At least -he-
> never lied to me!  Maybe I would have been better off if I'd listened to
> him, just once!"
> 
> 
> 
> - - - - -
> 
> 
> 
> "What a haul!"
> 
> The howls of angry women receding behind him, Happousai bounded along
> the wall, a large sack of silky treasures over his shoulder.  He
> chortled.  Liberating such darlings was even easier today, what with--
> 
> The walking stick caught him square across his forehead, knocking him
> off the wall.  He picked himself up, and glared at Cologne.
> 
> "Haven't you already learned to leave me alone."
> 
> Cologne held up a scroll.  His eyes widened.
> 
> "So that's what this is about."
> 
> Cologne's voice was trembling with anger.  "It took me three days to
> completely decipher this scroll.  What on earth possessed you to give
> this to Son-In-Law?"
> 
> "He can handle it--"
> 
> "No!  No-one can handle -this-!"  Cologne hopped down off the wall.
> "You have no knowledge of Jushenkyou!  When I finally learned what this
> technique will do, what it will set loose on this world--"
> 
> "You are quite wrong, my dear."  Happousai drew his pipe from his robes
> and carefully lit it.  "I know exactly what effect this technique will
> have on the boy.  And the best part is, you helped him learn it!"
> 
> "More fool I.  I should have fully transcribed the scroll for him.
> Instead, I may have doomed him, and many of those around him."
> 
> "Now, now...you win some, you lose some."  Happousai made a careless
> wave with the pipe.  "But don't give up on the boy yet.  You see, you
> don't really know as much as you claim about Jushenkyou."
> 
> Cologne's eyes narrowed.  "I have guarded the Cursed Springs for the
> last hundred years.  If anyone else knows--"
> 
> A trace of fire crept into Happousai's eyes.  "And I have spent the last
> three thousand years learning all about them, at the most intimate
> level."
> 
> "Three--"
> 
> A hand struck the back of her neck, precisely targeting between two
> vertebrae.  Her entire body seemed to light up with pain, and she
> collapsed helplessly to the ground.
> 
> Shampoo knelt next to the old woman, and smiled coldly.
> 
> "Out cold, but not dead."
> 
> "Good."  Happousai drew another mouthful of smoke before continuing.
> "Keep her restrained.  We may yet have a use for her."
> 
> 
> 
> - - - - -
> 
> 
> 
> Akane stalked into the dojo, and glared at Masami.
> 
> "There is no need to stare," said Masami.  "I have done nothing wrong."
> 
> Akane deflated.  "I guess not."  She sat down opposite the Shinigami.
> 
> "Akane, I am growing more concerned.  The taint of the Hollow is growing
> stronger.  Your physical abilities are boosted, but so is your anger and
> depression."
> 
> She scowled again.  "My anger, and what you call my depression, are
> growing because I've just found out that my so-called 'fiance' has
> betrayed me."
> 
> "No.  He has not."
> 
> "Just like any woman around Ranma.  Quick to jump to defend him."  Akane
> stood again.  "No need to waste my time talking to you;  you're just
> another bimbo ready to crawl into bed with him--"
> 
> Masami was on her feet in a flash, and her hand lashed out almost of its
> own accord.  The echo of the slap was loud in the dojo.
> 
> Akane stared at her in shock.
> 
> "Have I managed to get past your rage?  Is it Akane listening to me now,
> and not the Hollow?"  Masami's voice was cold.  "You want to hear me say
> that I am attracted to Ranma.  I am.  It is hard not to be.  He is
> handsome, fearless, honourable and kind.  In so many ways, he is a most
> admirable individual."
> 
> She scowled.  "You--"
> 
> "I will do nothing about it.  Attraction is one thing.  Ranma loves
> you."  Masami scowled.  "We can treat your infection.  With your
> assistance, we can probably remove it entirely.  But you must want it
> gone.  Do you understand me?"
> 
> "And what if I don't want it gone?"
> 
> "Then it will consume you.  You will lose Ranma, and everyone else you
> hold dear.  You will lose yourself as well."  Masami's voice was
> becoming colder by the second.  "Every time you feed your anger, every
> time you give yourself over to fear, rage or self-doubt, the taint
> becomes stronger."
> 
> 
> 
> - - - - -
> 
> 
> 
> Ranko stepped away from her male body, and turned to the two girls.
> 
> "Akane...what the heck happened to your cheek?"
> 
> Akane scowled at the floor.
> 
> "Oh, right, you're still not talking to me."  She turned to Masami.
> "Standard Hollow patrol tonight?"
> 
> "No."  Masami shook her head.  "Isane gave me some interesting
> information just before you left.  A powerful martial artist, with a
> Jushenkyou Curse, came to the district this morning.  She senses
> multiple Hollows within him;  probably, he suffers from more than one
> Curse."
> 
> "Taro."
> 
> "We will be proceeding to this individual, and then we will watch you
> battle him."
> 
> "We?"  She glanced over at Akane again.  "Does this 'we' you're talkin'
> of include the Tomboy?"
> 
> "Yes.  I think it is important that she see this."
> 
> "Okay.  You're the sensei."  Ranko unlimbered her nagimaki.  "So where's
> Pantyhose?"
> 
> 
> 
> - - - - -
> 
> 
> 
> The butt of the nagimaki knocked the Hollows out of Pantyhouse.
> However, it was not two, as Ranko had expected, but five.  Ranko backed
> off worriedly, as they began to coalesce around her.
> 
>  From the top of a nearby building, Akane and Masami watched the scene
> below.
> 
> "Those five will not remain separate for long;  they are too used to
> working together."
> 
> Akane stared in horror.  "They're gonna clobber her!  I gotta help her!"
> 
> "No."
> 
> The five forms merged into one, and stretched vertically, until they
> stood ten meters tall at least.  Massive wings stretched out from its
> back, ten arms reached out in all directions, and the white mask was
> adorned with two long, wicked horns.
> 
> Akane turned to stare at Masami in shock.  "What are you saying!?"
> 
> Ranko leaped into the air, dodging a claw attack, but was promtly
> blasted to the ground by an energy attack.
> 
> "Did you not turn away from him?  Did you not tell him that you were no
> longer his fiancee?"  Masami's voice was cold as an Arctic wind.  "Did
> you not call him traitor, uncaring, liar?"
> 
> Ranko picked herself out of the dirt, shook herself off, and raised the
> nagimaki before her.  A second energy blast rippled around her, but
> failed to connect directly, as though the glaive was shielding her.
> 
> "You--you heard me?"
> 
> "Quite easily."  Masami pointed down at the battle below them.  "Do you
> see that Hollow?  It is a Menos Grande - a smaller one, but still very
> dangerous.  They come into being when too many Hollows gather in one
> area."
> 
> Three more Hollows moved into the battle area;  Ranko leaped forward and
> cleanly split its mask, destroying it.  The other two ignored her,
> however, and merged with the larger Hollow.
> 
> "Some kind of super Hollow?"
> 
> "Yes.  They feed voraciously on other Hollows, increasing their size
> until they can become almost invincible."
> 
> Ranko scowled, and jumped in closer to the Menos Grande.
> 
> Masami continued relentlessly.  "This is the path before you, Akane."
> 
> Ranko twisted to the side, dodging another energy blast, and let the
> turn pull her back towards the Hollow.
> 
> "This is where your anger, jealousy, all your negative emotions lead."
> 
> The creature raised one massive foot, and stepped on Ranko.
> 
> "These emotions feed on each other, and grow."
> 
> Ranko grasped the glaive firmly over her head, and the Hollow's foot
> would not descend to crush her.
> 
> "If you let that part of you consume you, this is what you could
> become."
> 
> She slashed, severing half the creature's foot, and was drenched in its
> blood.
> 
> "A monster."
> 
> Akane shuddered.
> 
> "You have two choices.  Let Ranma help you now..."
> 
> Ranko leaped backward, her feet touching the tree behind her.
> 
> "Or let Ranko help you later."
> 
> She leaped into the air, and with one firm strike, cut the Menos' head
> clear in two.
> 
> 
> 
> - - - - -
> 
> 
> 
> Akane leaned back against the dojo wall, then collapsed to the floor.
> Her eyes overflowed with tears.
> 
> Masami knelt beside her, and wiped a tear from her cheek.
> 
> "That you can still weep tells you that the Impureza has not won."
> 
> "I can't let that happen to me," Akane sobbed.  "I've gotta...gotta let
> him know that--"
> 
> "No.  You don't need to let him know."  Masami smiled.  "You just need
> to know it yourself."
> 
> Akane looked up at Masami.  "I'll do it...I'll help you clear the taint
> from my soul.  I want to be free of it.  I hurt him so bad..."
> 
> "I will help you."
> 
> "Thank you."  Akane's voice was almost a whisper.
> 
> "Look strong, now.  They are coming."  Masami stood and turned to face
> the door, as Ranma and Ranko entered.
> 
> "Looks like it was a hell of a fight, Masami."  Ranma grinned.  "I can't
> wait to remember it."
> 
> "I think you will appreciate it."  Masami glanced over at Ranko.  "You
> need to recharge;  I think it's time to re-integrate with your other
> half."
> 
> Ranko scowled.  "No."
> 
> 
> - - - - -
> 
> 
> Special thanks to ChaosBurnFlame, who supplied a lot of feedback on this
> chapter.
> 
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