[FFML] [XOver][R.5/Bleach] Pale Horse Chapter 6: Tainted (2nd try)

[skychan]

Even with this version there is still some bit at the begining that is
scrambled though not as bad as the first version.  It looks like once past
that its flowing as it should.  I'm curious if you are rewriting the
begining to de-emphasize Cologne's knowledge?  If so I think it adds
credence to this being some ultieror plot of Happosai's.  It makes one
wonder if he's just here trying to retrieve his shinigami love from the
past, or kill a rival for certain...  I look forward to finding out.
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