[FFML] [fanfic][UY/Ranma/SisPri] "Lonely Souls"(final draft)

[The Eternal Lost Lurker]

I got news for you, Fred.

Your "final drafts" could do with a metric assload of proofreading. You
haven't come anywhere remotely close to removing all the minor grammatical
errors and typos. ^^;;;

I'm just now reading the first prologue, and not even a quarter of a way
through it I've found no fewer than 20 errors.

But, that's what the FFML is for, after all...

It's still an interesting story, although the comments I made about it many
years ago probably still stand...I may have more comments later.

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