[FFML] [fanfic][UY/Ranma/SisPri] "Lonely Souls" Prologue "A" Side (final draft)

[Bira]

On 7/30/07, Frederick Herriot <pyeknu at hotmail.com> wrote:
> Minna-san,
>
> As I'm slowly getting myself back on my feet in many ways, I've been moving
> to clear up some things left undone in the fanfic world before I got sick
> and had my toe amputated, plus being forced to relocate to Canada.  Here's
> the first part of "Lonely Souls," with it redone in past tense, which will
> be the final draft prior to posting to RAAC.  Enjoy!
>
> Fred

This is very well-writen, but it kinda lost me. I only watched a few
episodes of Urusei Yatsura, and I have only the vaguest idea of what
Sister Princess is about, to maybe that's the problem.

I got confused about all the alien empires at war - I don't recall
anything like that from UY. It also felt a little strange to read
about Ataru going from a good-for-nothing lech to an alien potentate
complete with mansion and army of servants in literally the blink of
an eye.

I know knowledgeable fans are usually the ones who get the most out of
any given piece of fanfiction, but I think it wouldn't hurt to give a
bit more background for the benefit of those who don't know some of
the source material but are interested in the story.

So, with that said, could you give some pointers about the characters
and situations that appear here? A few links would be enough, I think.




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