[FFML] [XOver][R.5/Bleach] Pale Horse Chapter 5: Within and Without

[Bira]

On 8/1/07, Timothy Groves <groves_ca at yahoo.co.uk> wrote:
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> Pale Horse
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> Chapter 5:  Within and Without

I'm just writing to say I like this story very much. It has a few
interesting elements, and so far seems to focus on my favorite part of
Bleach, which is solving mysteries and slaying monsters in the mortal
world (rather than DBZ-like fighting that goes nowhere in Soul
Society). I also liked that it didn't get mired down in "standard"
Ranma or Bleach sillyness - Ranma and Akane are actually capable of
having a conversation and cooperating on something, and the people of
Soul Society don't go for murder at first sight.

I'm not so sure about the ending of this fifth chapter (the bit about
"Hollow Bites Make You Evil"), but I'm willing to wait and see what
happens next :). Overall, a very good story.


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Bira
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